Also, here is the line drawing for my technical strip! Yay!
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| Sorry for the slight fuzziness...for some reason, I've been having a focus battle with my camera lately...maybe I shouldn't have dropped it....and maybe I shouldn't be making this caption so unnecessary. |
Arden, your strip is looking very promising. Just make sure that you position your compositions better. Center it more for panel 1. For panel 2, bring the wardrobe down (so the top isn't cropped and so the base matches the ground on which the guy stands). In panel 3, lower the wardrobe just a hair (we have to see plenty of it to understand the punchline), and you can probably slide more to the edge (and crop off more) the t-shirt guy to make more room for the viewer to see the contents of the wardrobe. One last thing I didn't tell you in class: somehow give depth to the space inside the wardrobe so it reads as depth and not as a large poster (for instance, you may darken the sky, perhaps have the edge of a tree on the right side of the opened wardrobe, etc.). Very cool!
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